Two people come out of a building and into a story…
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It’s a burning building. Lots of smoke; fire up in the air. Two
people are trapped. Through the chairs, desks and different burnt items lying
on the floor; they come out of the building. They are in pain and walk
slowly. There is no one around as they edge forward. Their steps reflect their distress.
Suddenly;
like water in the desert they see an ambulance passing by. With their last bit
of strength; they try to scream and alert the ambulance driver.
But it was no use; as he did not seem to hear them. They fell on the floor.
Still hoping that they could help them; they tried to scream again but nothing
came out of their mouths.
They were about to pass out when suddenly a hand
reached to their shoulders. They looked back and saw the ambulance man. Then;
they closed their eyes as they knew that everything would be alright. Never
lose hope in any situation.
I enjoyed your story because I find your writing style good. You were able to paint the story well and I could visually see what you wrote. I also like the message of the story. Even though the story is fictional, you still manage to bring a very relevant message that is non-fictional to it.
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Very well done! Reading this stirs up an emotion. A great achievement in such a short story.
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